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What if...? by ~Whogirls101:iconWhogirls101:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Spoken Word


What if I died.
Would anybody really cry?
Or would they just shed a tear
and go about their life?
What if I decided to kill myself.
Would you really care?
Or would you just say so
And not shed one single tear?
This is kinda stupid
I know I'm kinda dumb
But I know for a fact
That I'm alone.
I may have friends
Some here
Some there
But at the end of the day
I'm left alone
To cry my bloody tears
©2009 ~Whogirls101
:iconwhogirls101:

Author's Comments

These are the questions I ask myself every day.
Would anybody care if I died today?
What if I killed myself?



Written in about 5-10 minutes.
Just now.
Fresh out of my head.

Don't ask where it came from.

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~Snickerss Jul 2, 2009, 5:46:24 PM
Really good
I know I used
to feel this way
ALOT
:iconwhogirls101:
~Whogirls101 Jul 2, 2009, 6:02:32 PM
Thank you. (:
It's kinda the same with me...I really hate feeling like this.

--
Everyone has their one true blue friend in life..have you found yours?
--
:music:...I'm sorry I can't be...perfect...:music:
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Who am I, you ask? I'm the symbol of your nightmares. :]
:iconfallen--angel89:
~Fallen--Angel89 Jul 2, 2009, 11:25:50 PM
nice, i can understand the feeling very very much
:iconwhogirls101:
~Whogirls101 Jul 3, 2009, 3:06:01 PM
Thank you. (:
Yeah...feeling like this totally sucks. -.-

--
Everyone has their one true blue friend in life..have you found yours?
--
:music:...I'm sorry I can't be...perfect...:music:
--
Who am I, you ask? I'm the symbol of your nightmares. :]
:iconfallen--angel89:
~Fallen--Angel89 Jul 3, 2009, 8:01:19 PM
=( im here to talk if you want to *hug*

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I'm more dead than alive when I can't be with you.

Forgive me for what I do my love; in the depths of insanity the sane man holds no court.

I dream of a love. . . A love that even time itself will lie down and be still for - Practical Magic
:iconwhogirls101:
~Whogirls101 Jul 3, 2009, 8:47:09 PM
Aww...thats sweet of you! *Hugs back*
There's nothing really to talk about, though...I just sometimes fall into these spells that last for days....

--
Everyone has their one true blue friend in life..have you found yours?
--
:music:...I'm sorry I can't be...perfect...:music:
--
Who am I, you ask? I'm the symbol of your nightmares. :]
:iconfallen--angel89:
~Fallen--Angel89 Jul 3, 2009, 9:03:46 PM
yeah i know the feeling. i got over my selfharm and depression about a year and half ago, and i still have periods when i slip back into the depression =( i hope you're spells are too bad =(

--
I'm more dead than alive when I can't be with you.

Forgive me for what I do my love; in the depths of insanity the sane man holds no court.

I dream of a love. . . A love that even time itself will lie down and be still for - Practical Magic
:iconwhogirls101:
~Whogirls101 Jul 3, 2009, 9:11:52 PM
It's good to hear you got over your selfharm!(:
I don't think they're that bad....thanks for your concern! :hug:

--
Everyone has their one true blue friend in life..have you found yours?
--
:music:...I'm sorry I can't be...perfect...:music:
--
Who am I, you ask? I'm the symbol of your nightmares. :]
:iconfallen--angel89:
~Fallen--Angel89 Jul 3, 2009, 9:20:10 PM
thanks, i hope it isn't, its bad stuff to go through!

--
I'm more dead than alive when I can't be with you.

Forgive me for what I do my love; in the depths of insanity the sane man holds no court.

I dream of a love. . . A love that even time itself will lie down and be still for - Practical Magic
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